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by rippersgirl

schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I'm happy they didn't kill Spike, he wasn't responsible, what with the chip making him more violent an' all. I'm also happy Giles finally has someone, he too often gets cast side! There are a few speling mistakes, though, or where a word doesn't fit in the context, you may want to re-read, or get a beta-reader... Just a suggestion. Over all, very good!

-Shayne

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