rate_review Reviews

I liked it because I thought that Faith was a stand up person, but she was just like a guy
promising that she loved her, and when problems get going, sneaking off to fuck someone else and knocking
her up. Waste of a good story. Can't believe I waited for the ending to this one.
She would have been better off with Spike and I hate him.

Okay.. I love the whole concept but I've read this same story almost word for word by like 10 other writers. If you're going to do this story change it some. Make it Faith/Tara or F/W or even F/D The F/B has been done. And change the whole waking up with it. Geez, Make it a spell gone bad or something. Just because you change Faith from living with Giles to someone you've created doesn't make the story any better.

ahah! You're revising the story; hmm... don't know if that was a good idea... BUT I'd like to read what else you've done to it so please continue.

Anyway don't mind Revenge's review (although I do like the character suggestions) 'cause hell they do live on a hellmouth anything is possible even waking up with a dick!

Hope to read more revising soon (waves)

I'm glad you reposted.

Wow, things change so fast around here. I feel like Dorothy in Oz.

I have to say, I do love the original, but I was curious to see what the reposts would look like.

Oh well, I'm just glad you decided to put it back. Ciao!