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for A Second Chance

by deniedheaven

schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. You wrote it so bittersweet. And there was real pain. I cried more than once.
But the Christmas... It was so sweet I have cavities and a sugar rush. It was cute and now I'm sure I won't be needing anymore fluffiness for a few days ;)
At least you showed your flexibility when it comes to writing, if nothing else. You can write both fluff and angst ;D
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, what an emotional and strong start. You had me crying and howling along with Spike (I can tell you that my folks didn't appreciate it one bit ;) ).
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I cried my eyes out. And then I laughed at Ethan's practical jokes. Loved it.
person gemogirl
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, really sad at the beginning but the ending was great, i am a sucker for happy endings.
person asydnes
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I just love the way that you ended the story with the biggest bulk of the family able to enjoy centuries together! *sighs happily* For all the pain and torment Spike went through and the confusion and frustration Xander/Alex suffered, in the end everything worked out just wonderfully. :D

*Mwah*
Dae