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for Double the trouble, Double the pain

by Ephiany

person Krulos
schedule July 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am completely enjoying this, especially the way Tara set out to make peace between Buffy and Faith. I also love the way you have Faith written here in the first chapter, and I actually wanted to comfort her; so: well done regarding making people feel for the characters. I am referring to wanting to comfort her when she's silentely crying.

Thank you for writing this, and by the way; I love it!

Sincerely,

Krulos, one of your fans.

P.S. This gentle chapter made me very happy, oh, and one thing I'd remind Willow "Faith's not a demon, she's a young woman- much like you, actually..." as a form of a gentle rebuke to her for her cruelty towards her neighbor's friend.

person tim
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, but it screams sequel. please