rate_review Reviews

I love the way you show Buffy's naievete at the beginning, but have her walk in on Spike and Xander, knowing what they were doing. I did not, however, appreciate the incendiary use of the word 'fag' to describe her friend, even if she was just using Spike's term for a cigarette.

I admit, you could have gone in a completely different direction with this little ficlet - I can just see Spike and Xander taking care of the demon menace - or watching Buffy take care of it, and becoming aroused as a result.

Overall, I found it an interesting tale. Happy writing!