rate_review Reviews

Ok i have to say, DAMN SEXY!
I think that Xander is UNDERreacting a tad. I mean, he's essentially been beaten into sexual slavery not knowing if his best friends (that he would give his life to protect) are alive or dead... i don't think that any amount of stimulus to his dick would push those thoughts away. i was expecting a few rape scenes (like the first one when Angel jizzes on him) before he even started to react to the two vampires.
Xander seems a bit spineless and out of character to pretty much go right along with this with only a LITTLE bit of protest. I'd expect him to go down fighting tooth and nail!
BTW, i thought Xander would have to call Angel Master, but it is SO MUCH BETTER that he has to call him Daddy!!
the accents were very well imitated too.

Mhmmm,love the threesome action, very dark yet still sexy story.

Great! Very hot!

all i can say is... guh. mop up the slobber off my chin and pretend that i am totally cool in front of my hub. wow, this so delicious i cannot even believe it. please update soon cause that is too hot to just leave. this is a masterpiece that needs to be finished and admired for its sheer beauty. yummy nummy smut for my tummy. bloody fucking awesumness. i think i am too incoherent from lust to rave about this fic anymore. three words: more please god. well done

You so need to update. I know it's been quite awhile since you have but you really really should.

OK so now what? I mean you got the reader all hot and bothered now what? Whats the pointof the stroy or is it a pwp?

this is an interesting story to say the least i like the part where Angelus took Spike while making Xander get all horny at the thought of Angelus doin the same to him-i cant wait to read the next chapter i hope u post it soon.

aaaaaaand? i've been waiting like weeks for this story to be finished!!!! please write more!

Well uhhhh that was extremely kinky.... little freaky but interesting enough.. hope to see more!

oh god that was unbelievably hot please update