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The only thing that compelled me to read this fanfic, was the amount of grammatical errors in your summary and the usage of caps. Do you realize just how obnoxious your summary looks? I breezed through your three chapter story and was left very disappointed. You've made several spelling errors and continue confuse common words (their and they're for instance). Since I like giving advice or praise in my reviews I shall not leave with out suggesting that you find a good friend (hopefully someone in high school, or someone who is currently ace'ing their English lessons) and have them act as a beta reader for you. Either that or ask a teacher to look over your stories before you submit them. Does the term 'short and sweet' ring a bell to you? Needless to say your 'chapters' are too short even to be called chapters. I could continue going on, but will leave on this note.

Nice fic but you need a beta for language. More please.

Spikestheman has got a nerve asking you for a quality fic when he himself is unable to spell although English is his native language! (truth hurts, eh?) I loved your descripitions and the premise of this story you simply need guidance for spelling and grammar, no big, lol! So don't worry about this type of remarks and only heed truly constructive criticisms.

U should get an editor for plot development and spelling and grammatical errors. There was also a lot of unnecessary info that slows the story down and doesn't really encourage people to read it. Have someone look it over, and it should be okay.

Well where do I start....this is actually painful to read...do you know jojo?This is grammatically all over the place...obviously english is not your first language, thats fine believe me, but, you must try and spell correctly and have at least the right punctuation.
The actual stroy is thinner than my Auny Marj and believe you me thats thin!!!!!!!!!!! Pleaee can we have qulaity stories on this site...keep going and maybe you will improve,sorry, but the truth hurts!!:)