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for Making Things Right

by Ria

person Emma
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, and an excellent twist, I can't wait to see how this ends.
Keep writing and i will keep reviewing!
Please continue your doing brilliantly
person Abby_Luver
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...
person kilroy
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please write some more. i really need to know whats going to happen to my poor baby.
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleaes update soon!
person Eileen
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave it hanging like that too long......
person Spikeluvsme
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter! keep it up!
person lilithangel
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, you captured Spike's nobility really well, I am almost afraid to find out what has happened to him.
person Ella
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, very creative. i hope you'll write more!
person JaceyBaby
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! i love the way the emotions are played. update!
person J
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!!

*Please* make this better! Your storyline and characterisations are wonderful.... but I need Spike to be OK!

Update soon please!

J