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by India

schedule February 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Cute idea. I would rather explicit words for explicit acts (instead of cutesy euphemisms), but that's merely a preference. Lots of typos.
person Sissy
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the sweetness between the two of them, but please tell me that you are not going to let her die..... I love happy endings.. if this isnt going to be one, i am not sure i will read the rest.

sissy
person Burnz
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sad but very sweet. Good job.
person unique78
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely adore this story. Please continue. I hope that i can read it sometime soon
person Rayne
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sheds a tear* i loved it!!!

~R.
person Nakay
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such beautiful work! I loved it, made me cry.
person Alice
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww.... that is so sweet and so sad. makes me all sniffley. Will there be more?
person marley
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic alot. Poor Dawn! Hope Spike does something about that.
person Anon
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter...love caring Spike!
person Monkey
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I am actually crying. This fic is filled with such pathos, you know the tragic end is inevitable but you still hope.