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for I fall to pieces

by Azrielle6969

person Purple Moose
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue soon, give your muse a chocolate fountain for me!
person MarzBar
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this fic. Please continue it soon!
person NEO
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finish this and all y our other fics, they are all great!
person Aisling
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more soon cya x
person feistypumpkin
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love how you integrated Dawn in the story so well. If someone had just read that chappie and that one alone they would never know any different. Can't wait for more!!
person jane
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everything made perfect sense. Love it.
person ScreamingFlamingos
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Ok, the first part of the first chapter, I thought was kinda hokey, but everything else was wonderful! When can we get another chapter???? Because I NEED one! I don't want your fingers to become stumps, though I do want you to type up some more soon! This is an awesome story! One question, though. At the end of chapter 10, when Buffy and Spike were talking in her room, she was worried about him being stuck in the house all day due to the sun - but since he has the Gem of Amara, wouldn't that mean that the sun isn't a problem anymore? Anyhoo, loved the addition of Dawn. I was wondering if and when she was going to appear. Again, I'm anxious for some more story, get typing! :-)

ScreamingFlamingos
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no. i hate dawn. kick her out. make her die. leave, dawn, leave!
person aliciaspiked
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story and it keeps getting better. I love how you have everyone coming to terms with Spike in Buffy's life. I'm glad you added Dawn into the mix as well :-) Please update soon!
person Shay
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let you know if we want more? That's just a crazy question. I love fics where Spike and Buffy are sappily happy and Angel is going out of his mind with jealously. I definately want to read more of this. Update soon.

Shay