errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i just read all 25 parts for the first time, so please don't get mad that i haven't reviewed before...i can't stand waiting for stories page by agonizing page, so i generally check out older stories first...but i am loving it, it's like 2 wonderful stories in one! I loved spike as a pirate...and the dread pirate william references made me think of the princess bride...and how cute he was...whoops...i'm drifting, i liked that you let buffy have a second first time, though i thought it was going to be bad news when spike woke up alone instead of buffy...poor taste in my opinion...couldn't you give her one perfect night??? but, oh well, she's won her prince now...loved the claiming, the ring was a nice touch, like it was meant to be...i can see where you are getting giles' reaction from...but i do hope he'll come to terms with it soon...tara was adorable...and spike is always adorable...buffy is buffy, always a little unlikeable to me...or, not unlikeable, but young and unpredictable...anyway...reading 25 pleas for reviews was annoying, but I understand that you need to get your dues from the readers...so...here are some dues! write more! heehee
schedule
August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another good chappie how cute will domestic spuffy be?! XD
schedule
August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I had no idea that this was still being updated. Great story!!
schedule
August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
caught up on all those chappies i missed and am loving the way it progressed! cant wait for the next chapter XD
schedule
August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I can completely agree with your representation of Giles in the last few chapters. He's still very capable of the extreme judgemental nature the Watchers Council has, so good on you. And of course, for Buffy and Spike months have passed, not so for the rest of them :) Keep going, the angst only adds to the charm :)
schedule
August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*growls at Giles close-mindedness* *cheers for Anya and Tara* *attempts to hug Spike but is probably stopped by his mate as she definetely doesn't know me* Ahem. Great couple of chappies for me to come back to after vacation ^_^ Thank you so much. And yea those reactions are very good. Loved Buffy getting all angry at Xander...i think it was cute. And when i first was reading this I was confused about the claim thingy, thought it was cool but didn't quite get it. I though Spike was getting one heck of a raw deal since she would die...but hey now understand claim = immortal Buffy. Neat. Thankies so much, can't wait for more bye now!
schedule
August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoiying the story, you should carry on as long as you like, you are the author and you are doing a bang up job (ie great job). I think the way you presented Giles is very realistic, he has turned against buffy before because of Spike. Enjoying Spike and Buffy and enjoyed William and Elizabeth.
schedule
August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm still here. i 'm still reading. i'm still loving every chapter. i really don't watn this story to end. it's just so wonderful!
schedule
August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally think it's a good thing that you're not about to end the story before you feel it's over. The readers are an essential part of the fanfiction community, but that doesn't mean we get to dictate the writers, or try to bully them into writing their stories according to our wishes. So you just take your time, hon, and I'll be back to read the rest.
schedule
August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brillant! I love Spike's speech to Giles, it was so passionate. And I think you did a dead on protrayal of how Giles would react if Spike had ever claimed Buffy.