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November 30, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I just found the story and I love it I can't wait to see what happens next. I do hope you will finish the story please thank you bku
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September 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story! I hope continue it. Your a very good writer.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love your story. Please finish it. I've been waiting for so long. It's a great story so far.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sure would be cool if you were to finish this story...novel idea...have not seen this anywhere in the b/g fandom...but obviously, since it is 2005...I am rather late entering the arena~
Enjoyed what you have written here...
Enjoyed what you have written here...
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tigerlily,
Enjoyed what you have posted so far of this fanfic, looking forward to more!!!
Thanks
Jan
Enjoyed what you have posted so far of this fanfic, looking forward to more!!!
Thanks
Jan
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May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this story, as an AU, has the potential to be a really sweet romance--but if it's OK, can I point out some things? If I were you, I would honestly switch the setting from historica fan fantasy, because the setting just doesn't match the real thing at all. I'm not saying your setting is wrong, it just isn't accurate, and therefore the story itself loses about half of it's punch.
I know you said in your notes not to take to notice of historical inaccuracies, but if you want to write a good historical piece, (and it's really hard to do), you have to do some research. It's part of the pacakge You don't need to make a huge deal about itl--I would really just suggest reading some literature written contemporaneously with your chosen time period, or close to it. It's like understanding the plot and characters of a movie or show before writing about them.
Just a few basic points:
Buffy is too perfect--give her some flaws. If will make her chara cha charming.
Instead of transplanting a California girl to eighteenth century England, think about what Buffy might have been like it that era. For instance, she wouldn't be tanned unless she spent a great deal of time in the sun (and tan skin was *not* fashionable). Also, as a princess her life would probably be much more highly structured and formalized.
Try to synthesize the speech patterns--the characters switch from a little too formal to a little to twentieth century--try for something in the middle.
I put all these things down (and just realized that this is a *really* long review!), because I'd love to see this story improve. I wouldn't review it otherwise. Please keep writing =)
K.B.
As I said, your story is fun, and I'd love to see you take it one step fur tor to make it really good. Please keep writing!
K.B.=)
I know you said in your notes not to take to notice of historical inaccuracies, but if you want to write a good historical piece, (and it's really hard to do), you have to do some research. It's part of the pacakge You don't need to make a huge deal about itl--I would really just suggest reading some literature written contemporaneously with your chosen time period, or close to it. It's like understanding the plot and characters of a movie or show before writing about them.
Just a few basic points:
Buffy is too perfect--give her some flaws. If will make her chara cha charming.
Instead of transplanting a California girl to eighteenth century England, think about what Buffy might have been like it that era. For instance, she wouldn't be tanned unless she spent a great deal of time in the sun (and tan skin was *not* fashionable). Also, as a princess her life would probably be much more highly structured and formalized.
Try to synthesize the speech patterns--the characters switch from a little too formal to a little to twentieth century--try for something in the middle.
I put all these things down (and just realized that this is a *really* long review!), because I'd love to see this story improve. I wouldn't review it otherwise. Please keep writing =)
K.B.
As I said, your story is fun, and I'd love to see you take it one step fur tor to make it really good. Please keep writing!
K.B.=)
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I lvoe this story!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! You can't get it put up fast enough!!!! It's a very interesting story. I really like it! You took a big chance and it's really working! Keep it up!!!
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I say the mystery man is Alexander Harris. Or maybe he was one of her suitors...
Besides Giles/Buffy goodness, the best thing so far is Travers being Giles' personal attendant.
Cute that you put Winfred in the story. Cordelia'd be right at home during this era.
Would love if you'd post more.
Besides Giles/Buffy goodness, the best thing so far is Travers being Giles' personal attendant.
Cute that you put Winfred in the story. Cordelia'd be right at home during this era.
Would love if you'd post more.