rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry to say that this was not very good. While I think the idea of what Spike and Angel would think of the Twilight vampires would be very entertaining, the way the story was done was very erratic and poorly constructed. I know it was a humor fic, but in my opinion it would have made more sense to apply some character reality. Tara calling Jacob orgasmic? Fred and Spike? All the girls acting like twelve year olds? Spike finding being referred to as Fred's Edward endearing?

I'm sorry, I did not enjoy this. I might suggest you try it again as a humor fic but stay true to the characters. Good luck.