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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol very nice. i just love the fighting parts.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey awsome start of you have here. You have the whole B/F banter down perfect, great characterizations. Hope to get more of this soon.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it...u had me crackin up with the banter between them...i hope that u plan on continuing this one cause its definately gonna be great..i hope datedate soon...pwwweeaasseee
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this, please continue.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plz update! i'm captivated already! i can tell this story is going to be good!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start...u must continue. I think u are on to something brilliant here...look forward to read more.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really fun beginning. Fast-paced and funny. Can't wait to see it updated.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the line "If your real lucky,ill get down on my knees and thank you for thanking me"
bloody nice imagery on that!
seriously,good start,hope you continue it..
bloody nice imagery on that!
seriously,good start,hope you continue it..
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start you got here! cant wait to see where you're gonna take it. Update soon yeah?!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweet i luv it! keep writin!