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for Electricity flows

by Battlekitten

person memet
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more soon please!
person Queen Zulu
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice cliffhanger! Man! I wanted to keep going and there wasn't anymore. Guess this means I need to start nagging you. Great banter, I love the back-and-forth about Buffy's breasts. Snicker. The serious-or-is-it? flirting is awesome. Well, here's hoping you write more soon.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more, more more, please soon
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more. that was a good chapter i want to see more buffy faith
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it, keep it going!
person Queen Zulu
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Battlekitty, where have you been all my life?

Hee. Obviously I wasn't paying enough attention, if I haven't been keeping up with this story. Of course, there's the added incentive of getting to read several chapters at once. This story's good, and has a great premise--I'm definitely a fan of locking Buffy and Faith up together in hypothermic conditions just to see what develops. You've got their joking and banter down really well. I think I noticed one or two POV shifts, but nothing major, not enough to break the flow of the story. And, as I'm writing the review, I can't remember where they were exactly, so that's not very helpful, I guess. Either way, I'll know now to keep checking for your updates.
person cho
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is it?
well, i didn't liked the ending of this chapter, but that's okay, ;P
looking foward to the next one
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more, more please!!!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more. please what will happen to them in a cold crip ?mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
person SDAKerrigan
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me attem! I swear, I'll kill 'em! No one gets in the way of Buffy and Faith smut! Oh, but make sure Faith finds Buffy in chains at one point in the story. OR, another good plan, I could write that and you could get on with your good meaningful story and leave me to my perverse devices.