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Oooh . . . innocent flirting. I like it. A lot. You know what I like even better? Flirting of the not-so-innocent variety. The kind that leads to hot sweaty Fuffy action. I'm assuming there'll be some of that. And I love you for it. :)
Great chapter. :) More please.

Cute & funny. I am reallly loving your fic.

aww so cute! this is just turning out to be so cute! and good! And yay! I hope you update soon because I really like this fic.

ey dude, nice update. keep them comin an i'll be happy

Glad to see more. I like your Dawn...very season seven as far as I can recall. My school...what I can remeber of it, you could be sitting in a lesson, then suddenly you'd notice that somebody had set light to the desk next to ya...It was a little scary that way...lol. Your's still sounds better *smile*

I like that Faith kinda let her walls down a little in this chap. Just enough to allow for some friendly banter between her and Buffy. I hope that Faith doesn'cidecide to leave . . . at least without Buffy.
More please. :)

yes sleep my pretty sleep with eachother

I think u are doing an awesome job w/ this fic. I am loving it a lot. I can't wait to see how u expand things now that F & B are in L.A.. I love how nervous & protective B is being of F-it is cute. Update again soon. Please?

Very nice start. I like the fact that Faith isn't exactly fawning over Buffy yet. And thefact that she gave Dawn a cigarette . . . was kinda too cute . . . like a little bonding moment. Can't wait to see where you take this. :)

Did you say yere ere writing this for school? Why didn't I go to a school like that? Damn. Good to see a new story, and I hope to see more soon. There were just a few spelling errors that popped up, but I'm sure your teacher will point them out..lol. Oh, and put the sex in...cos we love the Fuffy lovin, so your Principle can fuck off...*grin* Just one thing I want to have a gripe about. And not only at you cos others do it too. I'm talking about writers that have Faith making smoking look cool, or seem cool. It isn't cool to die a horrible and painful death from lung cancer, or throat cancer, or any of the nasty things smoking can do to you. I've seen that up close and personal, and believe me, I'd rather somebody think I was wound tighter than a fucking tightly wound thing than kill myself slowly in such a way. Right, I'm done moralising...sorry, just had to get that off my chest. Which thankfully, isn't fucked up due to smoking. ay, ay, keep the Fuffy flowing, and cumming, and all that...*wink*