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for Bittersweet Goodbye

by HayleyJay

person nbvfn
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sniffle...waaaaa
person Queen Zulu
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, sappy and hot have never been so good together. I make encouraging gestures in your direction! More stories! you you!
person amie
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just had to say, this fic was brilliant and very, very well written. I got so into it, I had to stop reading a couple f times. You're a fantastic writer. More please?!

amie
person MICHELLE
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Haley,


Wow. I think u did a great job!! I think u should continue the story. U could write about how they spend their time apart, etc...