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for Surprise Innocence Twisted

by Azrielle6969

person jane
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good story Joyce is great as always.
person FangfaceAndrea
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is just so cute, i ove this Spike and Dawn is just so cute, all thigs consider i think Buffy's hadling Spike's retur rather well. i can't wait to see what's gonna happen with the whole Glory deal and Spike proving he can be good. can't wait for more.
person Kat
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Buffy/Spike interaction seemed pretty realistic to me. It's understandable that she doesn't trust him yet. Anyways, good update, and personally I don't find your story confusing at all :)
person jane
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY UDATE UPDATE UPDATE GOTTA HAVE MORE
person kiss_me
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... awww poor Buffy! dont let Spike hurt or try and take Dawn away! please? Spuffyness soon plz also? luving it... gr8 story cya x
person Burnz
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting fic so far. One point I didn't understand though was--"After going through the whole place she was sure Spike had taken Dru and left town. She didn?t know why but that hurt her. Deeply. ?After what we had how could he just leave?? " This was a bit strange since she had jumped up and ran away chasing Angel confessing her love for him then followed it up with going to the factory to evict both Dru and Spike.
person Jane
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh goody more please.
person Rana
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more! i am dangerously addicted to this story. i can just imagine Spike holding a pudgy little, big blue-eyed Dawnie. *sigh* exactly how old is Dawn? it would help in imagining how she looks if we knew her age. thank you for revealing the truth of Dawn's paternity to Spike so early in the story. i can't wait to see cuteness between them!
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please.
person feistypumpkin
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story you've got going here. Can't wait for the update.