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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love what you're doing with this story. It's great how your using canon events and fitting them so well into your plot. I love the Buffy/Spike/Dawn interaction and I like Joyce's reactions, too. I'd just assumed that she knew Buffy was the slayer, but I guess since Acathla never happened she wouldn't. Anyways, it was a really good chapter, and I liked that you introduced that little bit about Xander and Giles wanting to get rid of Spike, just to give us all a little more to think about. Update soon!!!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job of weaving in the various aspects of Glory's appearence and Joyce's discovery of Buffy's identity (in addition to the budding Scooby conspiracy). I look forward to your next updates.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was intense stuff there! I like it!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I really like Joyce in this story. *YEAH MOM!*
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. ROTFLMAO when Dawn kicked Xander....hehehehe. TOO CUTE! Can't wait te whe what happens next.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Baby Dawn and Spike together are so adorable. Kudos about having Dawn kick Xander in the leg.
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story! At first the flashbacks were a bit confusing but it's much clearer now. I love that Dawn is Spike's and Buffy's daughter and I'd really like to find out how that happened, you know with the monks, the green light and the impregnation. To answer your question the Buffy Spike interaction was VERY believable, and I like how you integrated conversations that happened on the show into your story. Can't wait for more!!
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love how you are infusing your story with actual season 5 events. i'm intrigued by the idea of Spike being the one given the Dagonsphere. very interesting twist. still in love with this story. update soon please!
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please.