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for As In: To Swing?

by Stoney

person LadyLiz
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No no no not done, more, come on PLEASE! Don't make me beg any more than I already am! At least another few chapters of Angel in complete humiliation PLEASE!
person Lily Constancy
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done with the fight scene. It was just right for the story line. I'm with you, I like my Spike as a lover and not a fighter. Oh, and the threat was a nice touch. I hope Spike makes Angels life a horrid night mare.

More please!! I need it. I crave it.. Please!!
person Azrielle6969
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see an epilogue where they are happy.
person MsSpikester
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not done yet! More.....need some gratification where B/S are concerned....Need more humiliation for angel....like taking over the whole company, and keeping all jobs - except His! Bwaahhaahahha.....LOL You do what you need to , but I would love to see them just as erotic as they were in the beginning.....give me more!
person spikesbabyblues
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, loving the story. Plz keep going with it. I want more, wanna see what happens next. update soon.
person slackerace
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You didn't mean *done* done, you meant fight scene done, right? 'Cause there is so much more you could do with this puppy. It's so sad seeing Angel lose it all. Oh, wait, it's not.
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. And the fighting thing works fine.
person Mark Evans
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! Definitely more ;). I completely agree with you, I like Spike better as a lover.
person Ash
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading this fic, I thought it was just going to be a PWP. I kept reading and I love it!!! I love the way you maed Angel out to be. To me he seems a bit like Angelus. I love that Spike is kin kinight in shining armor. This story is great... I can;t wait for more.
person Lily Constancy
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think someone needs to step out of the closet but remember when you step out, make sure you are wearing something Fabulous!! Another amazing chapter! I like the fact that she is with the person that is causing bum-boys ruin. I also like the fact that she knows her life would be hell if she let Spike get away. Looking forward for more!