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for Lost Without You

by callistosbitch

person Deacon
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
liking your story.
looking forward to reading more...
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
come on more chapters. i love this story its wicked.
person Dylan
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this...Its going nice. I like the flow, so keep it coming.
person AcidBurn
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really like the way you're going about writing Faith, she's very endearing. More please.
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you fucking mad? of course you should continue! you ca lea leave them hangin' like that! chop chop girl, get writing.
person willowfan
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please continue.
person poet
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! you should definately continue. you have a realy great start here! I really wanna see where you're going with it.
update soon!
person omnikool
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
So far so great. I like the idea of a hellmouth in Boston. That's worth exploring. Besides you promised us NC-17 and is barely PG13! :) So full speed aheah.
person steff
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is good,please continue i think it could really go somewhere. and if ur stuck for ideas just think 'hungry and horny' - they've just been in the fight of their lives - i bet their starving :P
person Carla
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please continue! I think you have something here. I'll be waiting for more!