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for It Happened One Night

by neverneverfic

person Cali
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you decided to continue the story. A party is always a good place for drama. Ahhh...another game...did not turn out the way the first game did, huh? I am glad you addressed the cold way that Buffy broke things off with Riley. Yes, I like that that she was confident & knew what she wanted but it was a bit scary that she thought nothing of hurting the guy she had just had a relationship with for a yeaan san see where Spike would be concerned about that & the almost cheating. Speaking of Spike...he made the sense that is not. It is okay that he might be thinking of having sex with someone else but Buffy should not want to dance/to be with anyone else but him to prove herself? Cordy's take on the Buf Spi Spike situation seemed dead on. Buffy is handling her feelings for Spike just a bit too well bordering on amazing actually cause well...it is the awful truth a crush can make you do the wacky...see Buffy's two second break up call to Riley. Is she really going to shrug & say oh well if Spike goes out with/has sex with someone else? Spike isn't in the same place emotionally but he does like her maybe more than he realizes or wants to allow himself. Spike seems like he is still dealing majorly with his fear of being hurt again. All of this is what makes me so into the story. It should be very interesting to see how Buffy & Spike handle their friends only with total honesty policy...which translates to can't wait for the next chapter.
person Alicia
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chappy! I'm glad they came out about their relationship- now maybe they can move on with developing a long-lasting- smutty one :-)
person stef
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue. This is ally lly good story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!
person Cidrouge
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this so far. I am enjoying the banter between buffy and Spike and thought that you wrote Buffy's first time very hot and sweet. I also liked that there was no pain. Keep writing can't wait to see what happens.
person Emma
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Usually I feel compelled to write a review, just to load up the author, build the ego and whatnot. Not this time though. I LOVED the story and how they resolved their issues. I also love how you put Doyle in their, and the exchanging glance thing with Willow and Tara. The ten fingers game is a classic, and my friends and I play it a lot. Anyhoo, love the fic, and please please please update again soon. You're a great author with a lot of talent. Now go, write!
person txjmfan
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter! Can't wait to read more.
person sanaa
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One word: brilliant. I think that this fiction has lots of potential, I love the first chapters, so I'm sure I will love the rest. So please update soon, because I am hooked. Thanks for a great read.
person Jen
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story & very hot. I hope you keep going!
person Annette
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love how mature, sexy and not screwed up Buffy is. Being able to be honest with Spike and holding out for a relationship. Too cool. Looking forward to more.
person Buffy
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! Hopefully they'll work things out and become a regular couple. Really great chaps. update soon!

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