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for Divine Intervention

by Azrielle6969

person morgan
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE NOW!!! AAAAAHHHH!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods i absolutely love this story i really cant wait to see what cecily will be up to next. Please please please update soon
person spikeslovebite
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'll bite...what happens when she gets smashed?
person Jerrica
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I want to know what happens when Cecily gets smashed. Bet it's slutty. Please update soon!

PS. I was just thinking... Elisabeth might have been on the pill since she was fifteen, but they wouldn't actually have given it to her at the hospital, would they? Maybe Liam isn't the only father-to-be... DS.
person Ash
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. Buffy sure told Cecily. I wish this was a movie, just so I could see the expressions.
person Jen
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was too funny! I love how posessive Spike and Buffy are of each other and I totally love when Spike teases Angel about wanting to see his fish out of water impersonation upon seeing Buffy lol. I got scared for a minute at the kissing part, b/c I though Cecily kissed him and he was liking it! Imagine my relief when I realized it was Buffy lol. Great story :)
Jen
person shippy
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please! Loved both chap 7 and 8.
person Fifi )(
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you should have Cicely less obvious and more sneaky but besides enjoying reading this and your other fanfon, on, your writing style has improved but might need a bit more emotional depth
person Burnz
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man that Cecily is tenacious! Kinda like a tick! :) It is great to see the strength of William and Elisabeth's relationship even after they have not known each other that long.
person willowmouse02
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the direction this story has taken ....