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by sluggie

person Black Dahlia
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just want to take Spike in my arms and hug hi! So sad. Great establishment of the family dynamic, btw. And the opposing points of vin thn the first kiss were very funny :-). Can't wait till Spike and Buffy finally meet....
person October
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update!

:)

I'm liking this.


I find it amusing that Spike's Riley's dad though. But then duh, it wouldn't be a story and all that.

Can't wait for more Sluggie!
person Karen
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Yeah Spike and Buffy meet, and FUCK! You're too good to us! I'm feeling their guilt and the overwhelming desire to do it again! Oh yeah, Sluggie, you got it going on!
person Kate
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy- I'm actually feeling sympathy for Riley after reading that prologue and the premise of the story. But I'm sure that'll go away pretty fast. Good to see you starting a new one :)
person dstarlit
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOoooo... this looks good! Can't wait for more!
person Nicky
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, loving the idea...sounds great. Also, i'm from Livol, ol, England - so no one is underage in this story...:P

I don't mean to sound cheeky but...YOU MUST UPDATE THIS SOON!

Alright?

Nicky
person Karen
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who is Riley's dad? huh huh huh ????
person moi
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM


I only read the summary and OMG I loved it already.

Please continue and update as soon as you can.

Can't wait, need more Spuffy now!!

person Lily
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story. Should be good!!
person Lili
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it could be a very exciting and thrilling idea : a young Bufy , an older Spike , pretty promising !

I hope there won't be too much angst , yet ?