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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JESUS W. CHRIST!!! *makes incoherent sounds, tries to catch breath and fails miserably* Okay, okay...*fans herself* That ..I...I...You...Damn.
*runs off to bathroom and slams door behind her*
*runs off to bathroom and slams door behind her*
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
?But you?re not my father, Spike.? She put her arms around him and hugged him then whispered, ?But you can be my Daddy?.
OK..that line was great! Loved the update and the whole scene was very hot. As always, looking forward to more. :)
OK..that line was great! Loved the update and the whole scene was very hot. As always, looking forward to more. :)
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 Meet the parents
Holy Mother of God!!!! That was one of the hottest things I've read in ages. I'm a gibbering mess here!! I loved that they both just knew, loved the way the lust just burst forth oh god......I'm off again. I can't even begin to tell you how magnificent that was. And for some reason (and I have no idea why) I found it sexy as hell when she was calling him Mr.Finn WHILE they were fucking. Oh hell I'm shutting up now to go read it again.
Sarah
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Holy Mother of God!!!! That was one of the hottest things I've read in ages. I'm a gibbering mess here!! I loved that they both just knew, loved the way the lust just burst forth oh god......I'm off again. I can't even begin to tell you how magnificent that was. And for some reason (and I have no idea why) I found it sexy as hell when she was calling him Mr.Finn WHILE they were fucking. Oh hell I'm shutting up now to go read it again.
Sarah
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me like muchly!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Impressive scene between Spike and Buffy . Their immediate chemistry was so obvious , thair sexual attraction so strong..
Hot , hot , hot .. More than hot. Spike was so seductive , and Buffy so captivating ...
.( Just a little thing bothering me , I can't imagine Riley being the son of Spike and Drusilla.. so I name him ..Dylan ...for my personal confort ( sorry ! )
Great start for a stoxtrextremely attractive. I fear a lot of angst , yet.
Hot , hot , hot .. More than hot. Spike was so seductive , and Buffy so captivating ...
.( Just a little thing bothering me , I can't imagine Riley being the son of Spike and Drusilla.. so I name him ..Dylan ...for my personal confort ( sorry ! )
Great start for a stoxtrextremely attractive. I fear a lot of angst , yet.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Buffy and Spike need to meet soon! I hate Riley!! (if anyone disagrees, please don't scorch me :) ) update soon!! this story is great!!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!!! Aside from that, it's a great story so far. I'm feeling sorry for everyone (for now) including Riley- still don't like him, but it's a harsh set-up. Feel just as bad for Spike, though, having to take care of crazy dru and all. Good job- write more!!!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking HOT! I can't wait to see more Buffy/Spike goodiness.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG i actually feel a little sorry for Riley!!! That's NEVER happened before (usually i hate him with a fiery passion). Mind you, I don't feel so bad for him that I'm not hanging out for the Spuffy to kick in. Wonderful start. I love the set up of the family situations and I am in extremely eager anticipation of what you're going to do with this.
In short, you got me hooked babes! Kindly update immediately ;)
Sarah
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In short, you got me hooked babes! Kindly update immediately ;)
Sarah
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
?But you?re not my father, Spike.? She put hems ams around him and hugged him then whispered, ?But you can be my Daddy?.
Fucking beautiful! Now, why couldn't I have lost it to somebody's incredibly hot well-hung father in the bathroom with his crazy wife upst--- Umm, never mind.
Love the instant attraction, almost like a literal magnetism. I'm curioo seo see how they're going to react after reality's had a little more time to set in... ;-)
Fucking beautiful! Now, why couldn't I have lost it to somebody's incredibly hot well-hung father in the bathroom with his crazy wife upst--- Umm, never mind.
Love the instant attraction, almost like a literal magnetism. I'm curioo seo see how they're going to react after reality's had a little more time to set in... ;-)