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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!!!! Just checked in and TWO new chapters for me :D I think another reviewer already said it but I feel so sorry for everyone!!! And then I feel guilty cos my overriding emotion is an intense NEED for those two to do the nasty again - I still havent gotten over that chapter. I absolutely ADORE this fic and I love that you update so I just hope you haven't exhausted yourself and we're going to have to wait for more;)
Sarah
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damnit!!! I also mean say say that I liked Joyces reaction to the fact that Buffy had had sex. The whole age of consent t see seems weird to me anyway, being british. It's 16 over here and as far as my friends when I was at school went MOST of them were doing it way before that even.
Your Joyce reaction was so much better than the one on the show - it always kind of pissed me off that she seemed to be telling Buffy off like she was a 3 year old who'd stolen a cookie - I suppose it makes more sense now that I know the age is 18 in CA. Still like yours better though!
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Your Joyce reaction was so much better than the one on the show - it always kind of pissed me off that she seemed to be telling Buffy off like she was a 3 year old who'd stolen a cookie - I suppose it makes more sense now that I know the age is 18 in CA. Still like yours better though!
Sarah
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Sluggie... You are a genus.. *bowing down* Genius. A Genius. Now let's see these two run into each other again!! =P hehe! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^_^
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! :) Please update asap!!! It's so great how Joyce reacted to Buffy's first time. I know a lot of parents wouldn't react that way. Anyway, please keep going!!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really good chapter. You make all the characters so sympathetic. can't wait for the next one!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your last chapter (ch.5) xtrextremely well written. I just love the William/Spike character in this fanfic. Buffy is also a great mixture of innocence with an adventerous side. Very sexy plot and I can't wait to read more. I think this is the first fic that I have read where Spike is Riley's father. I think that is also an intresting approach to this story. I look forward to more Dru as well, she always has a way of making things more interesting. Anyway great job- I love your writing and I can't wait for more. I'm glad to see you have been updating daily. Thanks.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, oh god, I'm loving your story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, VERY good chapter!!! But, one thing. Since this is Buffy's first time, i'm assuming she wasn't on the pill, and their were no condoms involved. so, is she gunna take the next-morning pill? or...is this a plot-line? lol babbling.
Keep it up!
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Keep it up!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh so very hot- more soon, please :-)
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A story where spike and riley are related? this has to be one of the most disgusting things i've ever read. tell me please that dru cheated on spike, or they adopted a kid, but not actual blood relation. other than that this story rocks!!! update soon. :)