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by sluggie

person Samolly
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story! I love that Joyce discovered the panties! I can't wait to see how you set up Spike and Buffy's 2nd encounter!
person Black Dahlia
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I hate having to work the whole weekend, but I LOVE coming back online to fin obs obscene amount of updates, so thank you, sluggie! Their first time in the bathroom was so hot... and, well, the hotel room scene is making me want to take up the cigarettes I quit a few years back, solely cuz I wanted one after reading that chapter. I like that Spike isn't treating her like a child or infantilizing her in any way, but just constantly delighted by being able to show her new things. So much smutty goodness... *happy sigh*
person Samolly
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn Girl! You are a writing machine! This is salisalistic and excellent as always!
person Kat
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh- new chapter already!! I like the way you're setting up the spike/buffy dynamic. Seems like it's already about more than sex, what with buffy's talk with willow last chapter. The car stuff was hot- anticipating the next update in a big way.
person Alicia
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Two more chapters, your so good to us :-) Very sexy- love how Buffy is both innocent and adventerous. Can't wait to hear how the rest of their afternoon goes ;-)
person Kendall
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!! I want Buffy/Spike please!!!! lol. great plotline, I can't wait to see how it works out!

:)
person October
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More. More. More.

:)


This is too interesting.
person Mairin
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the storry mry much, but I think Joyce was a bit
unrealistically calm about the revelation that her underage
daughter had sex weith her boyfriend. My mother would have
bounced off the ceiling if I'd come home and told her that.

But, I know it's just a story, and I like it very much.
person Alicia
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It keeps getting better. Loved ch. 5- it was nice to have more background about what happened to Dru- giving us a look at Spike's past. Can't wait for the next one :-)
person Ann
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhhhhhh, love this story!!! And thank you, thank you, thank you for updating so much! You have really built the characters up so believably. . .I always want Buffy and Spike together. . .and I'm finding myself in sympathy with all of them which is really good writing. You have hooked me!