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by sluggie

person Anon
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know what they call people who practice that 'withdrawing' method of birth control, don't you? Parents. Semen
is present long before ejaculation occurs. Seems like Spike should have known that, even if Buffy didn't. But that's
nitpicking, since obviously your intent was for her to become pregnant. You've really set up a volatile story situation
here and I can't wait to see where you take it. There's so much room for dramatic confrontations. I mean just
picture it....Buffy and Spike dealing with Riley, and with and and with Buffy's mother, who, no matter how calmly she took the news that Buffy was sexually active with her boyfriend, probably won't be nearly as nonchalant when she finds out her daughter is pregnant by a 39 year old MARRIED man. No mother is going to take THAT news calmly. Most of them would be reaching either for a gun, or for a telephone to call the police.

Don't get me wrong, I like the sex...but I'm itching for the real drama to begin. I do very much like the fact that he genuinely loves her, and that he feels bad about what has happened, but still can't stay away. So, come on kid...dazzle us!
person Anna
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really, truly excellent story. I love those updates! As for what Dru said. . .hmmm. I have a strong suspicion, and if it's true, before she was like this, she was a $*^#).

As alw imp impatiently waiting for updates even though you just did! ;)
person sable
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this story is pretty damn amazing. It;s something I've been looking for. I can't wait to see what all will happen. Make this a looong story..please *puppydog eyes*
person Sarah Aless
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad he actually knows now and can help Buffy through whatever happens next. Such a rocky road though. Can't wait for more. Hope you're feeling better.
Sarah
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person LottieluvsSpuffy
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, i love this and COO COO CAA CHOO tey are my favourite, please keep updating
person bigfan
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM

LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE,

Oh well... you get the picture :D

But anyway, I really LOVE this story

I wanted her to get pregnant SOOOO much, and I happened. ( LOVE YOU ) whahahahah

I hope Spike and Buffy get together for real, like living together or something. But I don't want to them to go to a different town. I hope Joyce is a little okay with them being together. And that the scoobies support them through anything. I think Willow would help Buffy no matter what.

But............ I just wanted to say.... KEEP GOING, YOU'RE DOING GREAT!!!


MUCH LOVE
person Azrielle6969
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chappie...
person Lili
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter ; I found Spike's reaction to the pregnancy pretty realistic . , but they are together in the middlet of a tempest !
Somehow I can understand how Spike is feeling free of his life , a life not satisfying..but he will have to deal with the fact that he's betraying his son.. They're lost , and scared , uncertain of the future , but they are together..Their desire to escape out of the real world for a little while seems natural. Please , continue the great work.
person nat
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That hole that Buffy and Spike have been digging is just getting deeper and deeper by the minute. I love that Spike was insistent that Buffy wasn't going to be "getting rid" of the baby and I am sure that no matter what he'll stand by her.
I want a happy ending for them.
person karbear57
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I wonder where they aring ing