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by sluggie

person kitty
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a`hhhhhhhhhhhhh new chappy soon plz
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I understand Buffy feeling like Willow betrayed her, but let's be honest; who blabbed first?
person spikeDchicK
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey there! Love the story. The angsty part is great though Im really lookin forward to see where and how it's end!
Keep goin.
person Burnz
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will anyone ever figure out what Dru is on about? Will broken relationships be mended? How will our protagonists escape this pot of boiling oil!! Dang! The angst! The drama! The damning attraction! Whew...is it hot in here? No, that's just you! Good job sluggie.
person Lili
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...an amazing chapter , so full of angst and painful discoveries , from the first line to the last.. Everything fell into place in a dramatic way , and I knew that the confrontation between Riley and Spike would come at the end , and Riley's words were so hard, but somehow , true.. We are really in the heart of the tempest .. Riley and Spkike fighting , that was the most difficult moment , especially when the father cried helplessy, confessing his love for Buffy, with his son in his arms ..I just hope that time will allow Riley to find a way to forgive Spike..? And now I need Buffy/Spike swetness and wild passion.. I'm overwhelmed .
Excellent story , beautiful in a heart-shattering way.. I would like a lot of chapters of this story out of the common.
Thank you for the update .
person Azrielle6969
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great confrontations. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
person buffy
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very gooood chapter, but i want more buffy/spike action! lol, i just hope ur not gonna have RIley tellin evry1.

--:)
person Tigger
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I DON'T MEAN TO RUSH YOU BUT PLEASE HURRY WITH ANOTHER UPDATE!
person Kat
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good Spike/Riley fight- feel bad for both of them. Can't wait to see what happens when the news about the baby comes out- Buffy had better turn 18 soon!
person Syra
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I trully love this story!!! With that said please update soon, these last four days have seemed like an eternity. Bring on the Spikey goodness!!! Thank you for writing it. >Syra