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by sluggie

person Burnz
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! That warsh.rsh. I wonder if Riley will see his way clear to sympathize with Spike cockholded lo' these many years. As for Spike, he may have to take a page out of Roman Polanski's play book. Good job.
person LottieluvsSpuffy
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, please update because its just... wow
person Celestria
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freaking gosh!!!U haU have to update SOOON I am dying this damn fic got me hooked line and sinker!!!!! pplease don't make me wait pleASE PLEASE [PLEASE PLEASE
person Azrielle6969
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! That was frickin awesome!!!!! I can't wait for the next chappie...
person Lili
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow..this chapter was heavy with angst , and I'm so distressed to see how things are upside down for everytbody .. and Drusilla 's confession .. The phone conversation between Spike and Buffy was difficult , too ..they need to see each other soon , to find strengh and comfort . I want tender spuffy love soon !
Another cliffhanger in your amazing story : how will I manage until next time ?
person Kat
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh boy- great chapter. Poor Buffy- poor Spike! I've been waiting forever to see whether or not you made Spike Riley's real dad or not. PLEASE update soon- that was a horrible cliffhanger you left us with!!
person Kar
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, Spike's going to get it from Joyce.... nananananana. Brassed off Joyce, picking up her daughter's cell phone is not a good sign. Hope Spike and Buffy can reason with her.... or blind her with their love. Either way, I hope it works out for them.

I know that this review is pretty long as it donesn't just contatin, "Grunt, good chapter, grunt, but I can't disappoint you.....The duckbill platypus can store as many as six hundred worms in the pouches of its cheeks.

My advice? Don't ever go near a duckbill platypus.
person feistypumpkin
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
review asap, please!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LadyTess
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story. It has great twists and turns. I never know what will happen next. I wonder what Mama Joyce will have to say to our Spike? Please update soon!!! I can't wait.
person Sarah Aless
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I didn;t see the thing about Riley and Spike's true relationship coming (trying not to be spoilery in case anyone reads who hasn't read the chappie yet). There is going to be so much hell on with Joyce and Spike!!! Great chapter, I like that things are not so secret any more - it had to come out anyway and it makes for great reading. Btw I liked your Joyce reaction (didn't agree with the way she reacted) cos to me thats typical of Joyce, seeing everything but what is actually best for Buffy. Ok I'm shutting up cos I could rant about Joyces 'parenting' all night and I've also apparently abandoned the 'spoiler' thing. In short, loved it! Can't wait for more..
Sarah
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