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for Coo Coo Ca-Choo

by sluggie

person FannyLovesSpike
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Spike and what a Heartless Bitch Buffy is.I hope he seeks comfort with Harmony.
person Sarah Aless
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God fix it! fix it!!! Please *gets on her knees* please make her tell him why she said no. Please I'm going to cry here!! (and it's not pretty - trust me)
Sarah
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person Kat
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Spike!! Poor Buffy!! Please update and fix it all soon!!!
person WendyPan
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SLUGGIE! HOW COULD YOU!!!! I love your story despite this major bad-ness tho!
person Sarah Aless
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey my dinner could burn every damn night if THAT was the cause of it. mmm mmm mmmmmmm. Wonderfully hot chapter. So excited about the ring. Can't wait for more of this.
Sarah
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person Kate
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good to see a new chapter. I've got a bad feeling this one is winding down soon, but I'm looking forward to the birthday scene.
person Sarah Aless
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO he \he 'son of a preacher man' thing. Great chapter Father Giles is lovely. Hope he can get Anne on medication, not that we need to see that or anything, I just think it'll be one more thing to make Spike feel better and more comfortable. Can't wait for more. *pouts* I want my own 'Spike tickle monster' (even though i hate being tickled - i'm sure i could make an exception for him).
Sarah
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person Kat
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really like the Giles addition. William's mom is completely whacked out- she reminds me of a religious Drusilla. Please write more soon- this is a great story. Everytime I think I know where it's going you take it in a new direction.
person Sarah Aless
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooohhh sooo intrigued as to whether William's mother is in fact the biggest hypocrite in the world. Oh and bless the pair of them for the position they were found in. God I don't know what would be worse, to be caught by ymothmother, a priest, your long lost father............but all of them at once oh dear!! Can't wait for more.
Sarah
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person sluggie
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A/N: Sarah: LOL... I know what you mean. Originally it was just going to be his mum, then I had the idea, her being all religious fanatic and all to have her bring a priest along to "show William the error of his ways", as I was beginning to write the scene, a vision of Giles popped into my head and I thought, you know what...how about I make Giles the priest then I thought, you know, I gave Spike and his mum the last name of Giles, so how do I explain Rupert having the same name..then it dawned on me in my sick and demented mind to make him Spike's dad whom I've never mentioned previously in the story...what a hoot!