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for Coo Coo Ca-Choo

by sluggie

person Azrielle
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, Please.
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much, but you need to put some spaces betweeyouryour sentences and make it easier to read. Good story, though!
person karbear57
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you naughty vixen.... got me all reved up and then no second chapter... you better deliver ;)
person Sarah Aless
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Karbear on this one!!!!! Second chapter, sharpish mate! :D
person Fifi Mash
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great intro chapters. lots of great smut/ Really enjoying cant wait for next chapter
person Azrielle
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More....Please...can't wait...
person cin
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it!!! hott stuff... i look forward to the next chapter. please update soon.