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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This one was hot as fuck!!!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!! make a sequel!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with a previous commentor who said that its good that you didn't waste your time with a crappy plot when this is clearly a pwp. This was a refreshing break from all the authors (I won't name names) who try and pedal their pwps as full blown stories, with pathetic results, needless to say. Good job overall.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is great. I like how you didn't mess around with a crappy plot but moved straight into the love scenes. some good philosophy subtley mixed in there. an excellent piece of work.
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intresting story. I hope you continue it, maybe get faith into the mix.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was Hot! Write more! That can't be the end.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes, that is the end, I only ever write one shots, glad you liked it
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that hot-hot--Excellent.