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Hi Brandi, When are you going to finish the story? I love so far what you have wen, en, Is Maggie going to help Angel and Cordy and Connor take care of the people in L A. Have a nice day.

Hey, I've actually been reading this story for awhile now (I believe you've posted it on a couple of different sights before this) and I just wanted to drop a line about how much I've truly enjoyed your story. For one the take on Xander's transformation is brilliantly composed. You broke it down into both it's physical and mental hemispheres, not giving either undue credit on how he's turning out and didn't make it into a "oh, I want you so badly Spike" or a "please let me stake myself *sob eyes* story. I would watch out on perhaps hitting a rut though...it's really easy to get caught up in getting through the rising action to the thick of it that a lot of authors will stop immediately after the scene that made them want to start writing the story (if that makes any sense). Anyways, great job and keep up the fantastic work.

Typically I'm not a major Spike/Xander fan, however, this is extremely well done. While slash in itself is good, it really doesn't mean anything (at least to me) if there is NO PLOT!

You have a plot, a focused love of Spike for Buffy (which I find disturbing, but that's just me so ignor that comment) and it seems, a 'committment' of a sorts from Buffy to Spike.

You test and strain the bonds of friendship between the group, and are managing to bring them back together again. Your characterization of the Btvs casts are well fleshed out and intriguing.

I enjoyed the way you had Xander seek Angel's help in order to help both Spike and Buffy. It showed a maturity that sometimes we (meaning other writers) don't give credit to Xander. I finished chapter 14 (I think it was fourteen) and I enjoyed the way you had Xander's demon recognize that Anya the mate.

As you can probably tell, I like the story! And to those that don't appreciate slash...a plot is a freakin' plot, so just enjoy the story and the ignore slash if you don't like it. Besides, it wasn't exactly slash/slash for the sake of getting two men into bed with each other, it was a necessary part of the storyline/plot.

That being said, I can hardly wait for your next chapter!

Hi Brandi. I've been enjoying your story and think you've done all the proper warnings etc. Keep writing!

Love it, love it, love it. Can't wait for more.
Oh, and Angela is a moron. Pay no attention to her. We all love the slashy-goodness.

this is so great. please don't stop.
thanks
bridget

This is a great story, it ended on page 11, is the rest listed here on the site, yet to be added or was that all of it? Whoever wrote this done an excellent job on it, Spike is my favorite. :)

Me again, I kinda answered my own question I guess..lol I see now the story has yet been finished and listed.... I really look forward to reading the rest.. GREAT GREAT STORY!!!

Please, no Spike/Xander-slash. It really makes me wanna vomit. Please don?t, I really liked your story so far, please don?t fuck it up.
I?m sure you have enough imagination to solve this other ways.

I'm really loving this fic, please update soon.