rate_review Reviews

hi...mh, me again. I just read the other comments...and well...
first of all...I love the S/X parts. I love slash in any way...even if it is only
pwp, which in your case it defnetly isn't. You write it so very amazing and it
fits perfectly in the story. I hate people who complain about slash in storys.
Hello, I mean there even was a warning...
and this is defnetly is a spuffy story...it just isn't as shallow as some other storys...
sorry, probably it isn't my place to say all these things.I just totally love this story and
it bugs me if people complain about stuff that I like so much...

this is by far the best story line i've read so far ...I can't wait for the next parts ...it just keeps getting better and better...i'm on the edge of my seat in shree blissful anticipation!!

OMG! You can't stop there! Please more!

Hmm, interesting very interesting. I liked that the Elizabeth part of Buffy is in love with the William part of Spike, that was very nice. Please update soon.

Lovin' this story so far. The chapters dealing with Xander's turning are the best yet! Xander's emotions are so genuine, just what I'd expect iis sis situation, and Spike is such a sweetie! (But not too sweet:-) The slashiness is yummy, and perfectly understandable in the context of the story. It just makes the Spuffiness to come all the sweeter. It's about time Buffy got a little jealous!

Sorry to post twice in a row, but I just saw Iffygal's post and I want to say--girl, don't give up on it yet! Just because Spike and Buffy aren't having sex doesn't mean their relationship isn't evolving. I'm seeing a definite shift in the dynamics, and I'm glad it's taking awhile to happen. I don't care how long it takes for them to 'get together' if the story stays as absorbing as it is now. In fact, the longer, the better!

Whilst not endorsing Angela's point of view completely, I find that I can't go on reading this story. Yes you'vrnedrned us about mm and ff slash. That doesn't bother me, what bothers me is that I have to wait for 25 chapters to get spuffy. Don't announce a Spuffy fic if it isn't truly one. And for the person out there who said that spuffy put her off and slash turned her on then isn't that a case in point? This is no spuffy fic.
And so on this.
Goodbye

I have to disagree with Iffygal. This is definately a Spuffy fic, in the fact that Spike is madly in love with Buffy, and Buffy loves him as well - she's just only realising it now. Spike may be having sex with Xander, but that's a totally seperate issue. Xander is still in love with Anya, but is but is having sex with Spike. s a s a vampire thing, it doesn't take away from Spike's feelings toward Buffy.

Now, that said, I have to admit it was the promise of m/m slash that got me to start reading this, but I honestly feel the turmoil that Buffy is in now, and I'm rooting for her and Spike to work things out. Me being a Spander shipper and all, that's quite the accomplishment for you as a writer.

If it takes another 25 chapters to get Spike and Buffy back into bed, then that's what it takes. It's the journey that matters, sex for the sake of sex is fine but Spike wants love, and I think it'll take time for Buffy to admit to herself that she loves him. Please keep updating the story.

You are telling a fascinating story, and telling it well. It is 'Spuffy' since Spike and Buffy are a couple, and have a mature relationship. I think your story notes are adequate. Your story is complex, not Spuffy pwp (not that there's anything wrong with that!), and you are handling various character plot lines well, blending Angel's story, Spike's and Buffy's and Xander's seamlessly...Keep up the good writing!

Hey. First off I've been reading your fic and I think it is awesome. I just saw the letter you wrote to Angela and let me just say, thats bullshit!
If she doesn't like the S/X than I suggest she doesn't read it. And there are way worse fics out there. This person doesn't know a good fic if it hit her between the eyes. Sorry just wanted to say that if this person has a problem with your fic, which again is a great fic, no one is forcing them to read it, so how about they remove that stick from their ass and get over it. Please keep updating, I am dying to find out what happens. Keep up the great work.
NEO