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first is i dont like slash, most of the time.. but this story is soo good i have to like it...
you made spike in to a person i could like.... and you made xander strong i think that..

i hope xander and buffy have sex lots of sex...and a really good talk they are some time the closest people on that show and some time they are like strangers i hope they talk and get really close....

dont let when people call you sick get to you who cares what they think.. this is a good story...

Brandi - I absolutely love your story thus far! You still have a few errors in syntax and such, but I didn't even notice them on the first read through of your story. Just to let you know how much I have enjoyed this, I have been reading stories on this site since it began and yours is the first story I've ever reviewed! Please give me some more chapters!! I've been waiting so patiently, but now I've read this for the fifth time and I need to know what happens next! Good Luck, and thanks for the story.

Gotta tell ya, love this story. This is so well done I don't even know where to start. First, I love how you've captured the voices of the characters, while obviously off canon, I can see each character responding in the way you describe in similar circumstances, ie: Xander's horror at his turning and who his sire is; Spike's attempt to be a good sire, while avoiding pissing off the slayer; Buffy's contradictory behavoir (think and feel one thing but act completely opposite to that because that's how she thinks she should be). I feel kinda like Giles, absolutely sucked in and fascinated by the whole vampire customs thing. Nice job with VampXander, haven't read that before and I like the premise. Keep writing, this is good stuff.

Oh, and don't let the knuckleheads get ya down about the M/M stuff. This site is called adultfanfiction, did somebody think we were sitting around here reading the bible? I usually read B/S and don't usually read Spike/Xander but you know what? not only do you make it hot, but it's kinda sweet too. Who knew Xander could be likeable again? One more thing, I like your pacing of the B/S storyline. I'm usually "fluff over angst" anyday, but this is even better-more real -if I can use that term regarding a fictional story, about a fictional world involving demons! Sorry about the babblefest, I don't review much, but I got kinda carried away.

Well, this is just too good and hot not to continue. Please, for the love of all that's good and smutty, and actually plot driven, keep going! Love it.

OH! BTW, your smackdowns of the non/Slashers and Spuffyfuck addicts are nearly as entertaining as the story itself. I was completely LMAO. I get where you're coming from, story wise, with the delayed Spuffysex. Actually appreciate it. Rock on, babe.

I've been waiting FOREVER for you to finish this fic and gave up about 6 months ago. Then I stumble upon this website and was shocked and pleased to find that you had picked it up again. I love this story and cannot wait for you to update. I think the thing that I enjoy the most about it was rereading it and seeing your skills as a writer inprove with each chapter. Keep up the good work. The more you write, the better you get.

Well, B, that sure took you one HELL of a LOOOOONG time, now didn't it? *grins* I forgive you. This chapter was good. It's good to know that once Buffy's admitting that she's confused instead of straight out denying it (either to herself or another). I can't wait til the Buffy/Xander convo. Take as MUCH time as you need with the Spuff, cause I'm definitely enjoying the fic as much without it. More ASAP, kay girl? ~flamey

Wait a tic, are you talking about me too? Cause you wouldn't be wrong. DAMN, girlie!! That was HOTT!!!!! But its time for Ahn and B to get some now too, huh? *grins* Hmm... *ponders* I wonder who was the one who groaned... *grins wicked* Bet it was Buffy. More soon! ~flamey

PS: Oi, guess what I just noticed? You posted this the day right before my birthday! Great gift to give another girlie, ey? *grins*

Oh my god! That was hot! Even though Slash is not my cup of tea, I thought I would continue to read your fic anyway. Hoping for some hot and heavy B/S sex down the track.

Okay first of all I'm really loving this story. Although I don't care much for the Spike/Xander thing you've done an incredible job with it. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for what I really want to read which would be Buffy finally going to Spike.