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for Moving Violations

by Roberta

person bansheeh
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
We want follow up story.....So shall they meet again at some party ??? with their partners ??? hmmmm
person Cin
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweetie said this stroy was good & she wasn't kidding. You suc such a way w/ Spuffy goodness. might i say that this story screams sequel!! great smut. keep up the good work.
person ancientgirl
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHG, that was HOT!
person sstktmh
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The end?!?!?!? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue with this, if you can,
Jenni
person Angela
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! You?re the most gorgeous buffoon of a fiction writer! I?m laughing my head off! You got your readers hot and bothered
with just one chapter! You should make this a profession......you cold make a fortune.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
person Angi
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sequel ?s an absolute necessity. Please!
person SeaBlue
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A--That was wonderful.

B--That was totally not the end! There MUST be more!

C--I love you and want to have your little pagan babies.
person cathain
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1