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for Ball & Chain

by Roberta

person MarzBar
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for more of your hot, smutty Spuffy fiction.
person era
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story i kno it has been a while but i was wondering if there were anymore sequals maybe a baby fic(i hope) just wondering keep writting
person Shippy
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You've done it again. The Best. BTW I would have applauded too.
person Jez
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!! That was hilarious. I don't think I have laughed quite so hard during as story as i did during the coconut incident. Where did you come up with that?? LMAO
person Roberta
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the positive response guys! I know how a lot of you wanted to see them get hitched, so I did it special, just for you : D

Donna, I'm disappointed that you didn't enjoy the fluffiness. I know it's impossible, but I wanted to make everyone happy. I felt like I HAD to write it lovey-dovey and romantic. You were so nice about it, how could I be mad? You could've said, "YOU SUCK!" lol So I appreciate that you were just being honest, and as kind as possible about it. *smooch*
A wise beta of mine once said of me, "You write in a combination of Disney and porn!" lol I've got the fluff AND the hot sex.

There is some hot smut a' comin' folks, never fear! ; )
person Donna
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I love your smut, but I couldn't stomach all the shmoop. The cliched Giles/Joyce thing, sappy songs, Xanpatrpatrol, all the I wuv you's. It was just too much for me to take. I tried skimming to get the parts that I would like, but to no avail. Sorry if I offended, but you have to admit fluff is an acquired taste. I just pretty much take the good with the bad, because there just doesn't seems to be a lot of Spuffy fics being written anymore. Your smut is priceless though. I'm just curious is it ok for you as a writer, for readers to like some but not all? And hey at least I'm not demanding you to change what you write for me, so pleaon'on't be mad at me for telling you what I didn't like. Would you rather I keep it to myself? If yes, then I guess that goes to show I'm better off biting my tongue the next time I get the urge to give my honest opinion.
person ancientgirl
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You never dissapoint. I love your stories. I'm glad you decided to give us a sequal. This story is just too good to stop.
person Shippy
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The best smutty spuffy writer you are. More...