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for Fueled Enchantment

by Nightmelody

person angie
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that's one of the oddest fics I've read, but also one of the better fics I've read. It kept me interested in the first chapters with the AU couple, but now- with 3 couples- I'm even more interested. I like the different perspectives we can get on the importance of the choices made and the different consequences in each dimension.
I love that the (almost) cannon "couple" is also represented. I can't wait to see what happens next...
person ancientgirl
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Huh? Too many Spikes and Buffy's, its quite confusing.
person bansheeh
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is c000000000l and a little bit original,
i know my new fav pair is LA spike n England buffy
or maybe black spike n dark buffy, the ce ite its all bout are boring now
i think , compared to the other 2 cupples, n well gelled spike n light blonde buffy is
our real buffy n spike...as in Joss characters*.
i like this twist ,loads n loads....
person Nightmelody
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the input, everybody. Sorry if it's confusing, my bad. I was exploring pivitol choice, and the different lives that would result from that one choice--so much easier to do in fiction than in life.

Banshee is correct. Married Spike and Buffy, the original couple in my story, have their happy ending all ready. Their story is essentially finished.(Bored now!) Blondest Buffy and Suit/LA Spike are Joss' from the show. Dark haired Buffy with the ruined leg, and unsouled black clad Spike are the most damaged, lost children... I'm working on their story now.

Nightmelody
person Azrielle
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was Excellent!! Please keep writing this story. I love it!!!
person Liz
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! I love it! Keep up the good work!!
person Azrielle
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent. At first I thought I'd be grossed out with the menstration blood but you wrote it beautifuly. Please add more to this story. The idea of them being so passionate for eachother after Willow's spell has always intrigued me. Keep up the excellent writing. I would love to know what happens when the scos fis find out.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Willow can't STOP whats happening. If anything she needs to help them so that they don't have to sneak around anymore. Your last chapter was pretty hot. I'm glad you decided to continue it. Please post an update soon.
person maribel
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loved your fic, is there gonna be a sequel? please, please, please say yes.
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do have plao coo continue this story--yikes, a wetware team from the Watcher's council!-- but am concentrating on my 'Well of Realms' at fanfiction.net so am not sure how quick it will happen. Nightmelody