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December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was adorable! I loved it.
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is so cute. i'm really glad i thought of it and came back to reread. keep writing!!~
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww. this was precious!! i love young!xander. and angel-peaches. i just /knew/ he would work in calling him that one more time. and spike was so cute. great job. wonderful story, it was sweet.~
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this whole story. All of it from Spike loving grown up Xander to Spike loving Xander enough to take care of him when he reverts to being 6. I especially liked that Auntie Dru came to the rescue. After having Spike take care of her for 'soddin' forever i was nice that she could do something for him.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story - very sweet. I liked the way Spike was so devoted to Xander even though Xander thought he was six. Reading this gave me a warm fuzzy feeling, I just wanted to cuddle the little guy! LOL
I only have 2 criticisms:
1. The story is out of order, I didn't notice until I hit Chapter 4 when I should have been reading Chapter 8 - it threw off the flow of the story.
2. Spike constantly calling Xander "Xan-pet" got on my nerves from the beginning. I thought it was a bit inappropriate especially when he said it around others, since no one was supposed to know about their relationship. Once in a while privately and when Xan first went missing - to me it seems that that would have been more poignant - that's when we would know that he really loved him.
I only have 2 criticisms:
1. The story is out of order, I didn't notice until I hit Chapter 4 when I should have been reading Chapter 8 - it threw off the flow of the story.
2. Spike constantly calling Xander "Xan-pet" got on my nerves from the beginning. I thought it was a bit inappropriate especially when he said it around others, since no one was supposed to know about their relationship. Once in a while privately and when Xan first went missing - to me it seems that that would have been more poignant - that's when we would know that he really loved him.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like your Spike and Xander. The depth of caring is just amazing. You might (constructive criticism, here) need a beta reader for basic spelling, grammar, and sentence structure; boring stuff, why should you sweat it? :-). Hopefully leaving you more time to write beautiful stories like this one.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this's awsome!!! Loved the way ya portrated Spike, he was juz so sweet an' patient with his Xan-pet.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think six year olds have some sense of identity. How come he doesn't realize he's physically different? Oh well. Loving the story regardless.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was fantastic!
I loved the way you showed Spikes tender side, without making him seem weak.
And the scene with a sugar hyper Xander was too, too funny! I sat and laughed
untill my ribs ached.
Great job!
~Azure
I loved the way you showed Spikes tender side, without making him seem weak.
And the scene with a sugar hyper Xander was too, too funny! I sat and laughed
untill my ribs ached.
Great job!
~Azure
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, but I thought you should know...You have chapter 4 posted in the spot for chapter 8. You go 1-3 skip to 5-8 back to 4 then 9-10.