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person MarzBar
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHEW!! I just read a few new (to me) chapters and, as usual, am blown away. Waiting to find out what the deal is with the 'shoeshine' prophecy and two years. Glad to have some Spuffy again.
person jane
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read this in a while but I'm glad I did. Great udate, glad to see Buffy and William reconnecting.
person Stacy
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I guess the only purpose for reviewing is as confirmation that I'm still with you. 'Cause I said time and time again that I love this story. It still gives me a thrill to see it when you update it. I particularly loved this update. It's seems as if William is finally pulling his head out his ass and toughening up a bit. I still want to know what this two year thing in the prophecy is. So anyway, loved the story, in it for the long haul, blahty blah. Thanks so much for writing.--Stacy
person Mole
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great, great update! Buffy and William are on the best way to be together again. I'm so curious what this 2-years prophecy is about. Hopefully, there'll be more soon. Just one note: chap 193 is identical with chap 191. So; I'm looking forward to the real chap 193!
person Mole
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My mistake! I've found the missing chap and some great Spuffy time!!!
person akarinacj
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. So much!!!!
Thank you for at least posting 3 chapters in a row. But of course it?s not nearly enough so I hope you update soon again. Can?t wait to see what happens next. What with the Shanshu prophecy and with Buffy?s and Williams love story. I just hope Williams stops being so afraid of everything and tries too meet the future with Buffy by his side, whatever it might be you have awaiting for them. Please update soon, please, please?
person Whisper
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And what an update it is! Thanks so much for this. I love this story and can't wait to read more.
person Beth
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've left a review/feedback note before, but wanted to say how much I like this story so far, as well as your previous story "One Normal Day". Been following along as you've updated over the past year or two. I've really enjoyed reading your take on Buffy with a pre-Chosen Spike and a post-Chosen, human William/Spike. Very nicely done! Looking forward to seeing where you take these two after their Christmas reunion. Thanks for sharing your stories!
person Stacy
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, an update. I love these things. As you know, I love this story and each part is worth the wait. I so hope William doesn't do anything stupid. Buffy's made a timely arrival it seems. I can't believe you've kept the secret behind the Shanshu this long. Willow must have a super secret locking message that allows her to keep stuff to herself no matter what. (That bitch!) I'm so curious to find out what she knows. Anyway, this is still my favorite fic. And it fascinates me that you still have the wherewithal to keep plugging away on it. I will as long as you do. Thanks so much for writing. Your adoring and enduring fan, Stacy!
person akarinacj
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, let me start by saying WOW!!!!

I just found this story a couple of days ago and was sorprised to see it had so many chapters but wasn?t finished yet, so I read the first part and got hooked. Haven?t done much lately other than reading the story whenever I could.

I have read some of the reviews, people that love the story, people that think it?s too long, well you know it better than me. But as for me, I think it?s the best potrait of Buffy and Spike/William I have read to date, and I have read many stories, (Real Spuffy fan here, he, he). You have made the story so believable as of what could have happened!!! A thousand times better than J.W. version, that?s for sure. And even though things have happenned so slowly step by step, they have also given us a perfect Idea of a William as human in a modern world, all lost, A retired Buffy that tries to be "normal", well everithing. Given her time to grieve for five years, jet also given her a carriere other than slaying and that was nice to read. You have just have time for everything every small detail and for me, it has been fantastic to read. (Even though I miss Spike... you know 6S/7S Spike.) But I will be wating impatiently for your updates. Please, Please, write soon. A wonderful story. Really. I could continuing reviewing a lot longer, making a lot of comments on all the things, small and big that have happened, but it would be a whole book if I had to review more than 200 chapters :-) So As a said before, please, update soon. I don?t care if you want to write another 100 chapters as long as they are as good as the ones you already have made. (Did I say WOW, before?)