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person Nazzy
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know this is going to sound bitchy, and I want to say that I really love this story, but, are you ever going to finish this. I'm finding myself wanting to read a conclusion. Is he ever going to get his memory back? Is Buffy ever goto tto tell him the truth? What's the deal with Angel? And what's the big secret Willow's coven wouldn't ler ter tell Buffy?
person suzanne
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chap 94 was part of the story, you needed it for some normalcy.....so it was fine to keep it in!
person suzanne
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My bad...chap 95...DMV....ok now read my previous comment
person babe
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can't remember if i already reviewed or not.if not, i shoulde 'e 'cos i love this story. i am probably one of your older readers, so i loved the dmv parts, as i had dealings with them when i took my son to get his provisioal license(learners permit). we were not even allowed in the building, as we were half an hour early!!we had to go and walk around the shops until we were let onto their hallowed ground five minutes before the test (well i say *we*, he was sent for his test, i was sent outside again) luckily he pasand and we won't have to go there again!
person uncouth kitten
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this just as much as the first chapter of the first story, truely appreciate all of the work and effort that is put in to make this so good.
person vicann
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I've just spent the whole of my day off reading this story, and the one before, which at 11:19pm I can't remember the name of (One normal day?) Sorry.
You have had my heart in my mouth and tears in my eyes. I am so happy I have found these two stories. This is the way it should have been. I am now eagerly awaiting your updates. Such a great story. (You even made me come to some peace with Xander, I dreaded reading anything about him, but you managed him really well).

Soooo good. Please keep it coming.
person spikegirl
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your fic! I can't believe that it is 92 chapters. I think I could read another 92!
person youngmei
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the spoilers, it makes me anticipate the chapters even more. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. I'm becoming a devoted fan!!!
person spikes_chick
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fanfiction, im really looking forward to seeing how you make william remember and find out about spike. You've done a brilliant job so far i love it!!!well done
person youngmei
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just can't express how much I am enjoying this story. It is so well written. I never thought that I would like William but the more I read your writing the more I find him endearing! However, I agree with Spikegirl, I like the way you are slowly giving William glimpses into Spike's memory. This is the part of your story that I find the most interesting. I keep checking to see if a new chapter has been posted because I am really anticipating how William is going to react to Spike's memories.