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person youngmei
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really great! Can't wait for more.
person suzanne
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lovin it! i can't wait for the next update. i just want william to buy a ring! and i want to know what buffy got!!!! i'm goin crazy here. And i would just like to say thanks for posting when you did, because I got it on Monday December 1st, which is my 19th birthday, my last teenage birthday....sniff sniff...but what a way to spend it!!
person vicann
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy this morning when I logged on and found all these new chapters to one of my favoritoritories. i can't wait to see where this goes, and I can't wait to see if William gets his memory back. More soon please!
person sammygirl
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh sweet of of almighty that was one seriously long fic! havin said that i love every minute of it and cant wait to see what happens when spike gets his memory back i loved the idea that spike cheated angel out of his mortality and all that. it was really good so HUGE congrats to you on a wonderful fic and update soon!

sam xxx
person Suzanne
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! I DONT THINK THIS COUET AET ANY BETTER!
person suzanne
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till William gets his memories back...I love this story and every time i get an update for the story I stop doing all work and I read. Screw college homework! This story is much much better!

I still find it hard though to get used to william and buffy. I miss buffy and spikes chemistry so very much. William is so innocent and helpless sometimes that i just want spike back.


good story! love it! can't wait for more!
person youngmei
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Take your time! I'm really enjoying reading this. Actually I would be quite disappointed that after all of this build up you gave William back his memories and ta da! It's done. I think that would be quite a let down. It's like reading a novel, you have created the setting, characterization, and it is building to the climax.
I also like how I have to wait a short time between reading each new installment. Usually I just rush through books devouring them whole but this is allowing me to really enjoy myself.
person spikegirl
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Youngmei. I would be dissapointed if you suddenly ended the story with a quick resolution. If you did that then the whole build up of detail would be for nothing. What you are writing is a novel, not a short story.
person youngmei
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear that you've been experiencing writer's block. I just wanted to let you know that you have kept me captivated and I think that your slow introduction of pieces of Spike's memory is really great. I agree with the reviewer before me that it is inevitable that William is going to find out about Spike's past. Really they are far too comfortable right now. Also I'm wondering will William finding out about Spike's past bring back his memory or will he simply learn about it and have to deal without really remembering who and what he is? Is Angel going to be brought in to the story and maybe jumpstart William's memories? Hmmm... so many questions but I can wait for the answers (not too long though...)
person Angi
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A hundret chapters! Yay spikealicious! No, honestly I just want to let you know that you still amaze me, you?re still holding my atten and and
having me follow your updates like a puppy-dog, because I simply love this story. I?m looking forward to you handling the next BIG rock on
the way. It seems inevitable that he?s gonna find out eventually and I?m strangely sorry that it has to happen. What?s it going to do to
to William? Choices, choices. I can?t wait to see which way you go. Please lead the way further soon. Thanks so far for all your wonderful
work!!!