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this is an reallllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesome fic and i love it soooo much! please update soon I wanna find out what his reaction is! ro!

Squeeel! <~ This is me after reading the newest chapters to ONL - love it, love it, LOVE IT! Great chas, Is, I love the angst throughout it all, great writing of William's reaction and injuries (OUCH!) and Dawn hugging him at the end. I can't even begin to tell you how much I'm looking foward to reading the next few chapters, espeically when their conversation comes up. :)

OK, the form didn't get completely sent the first time. Anyway, that was me after reading the newest chapters to ONL - love it, love it, LOVE IT! Great chapters, I love the angst throughout it all, great writing of William's reaction and injuries (OUCH!) and Dawn hugging him at the end. I can't even begin to tell you how much I'm lookiowaroward to reading the next few chapters, espeically when their conversation comes up. :)

glad you have given us such a big update, I loved chapter 130, where he spent the last of his pay cheque on the dress for her. Interesting reaction to the dress, can't wait to find out what that's all about.

SB

(Chap-130-140) Thank you , thank you so much for these awesome chapters. I love deeply the way you 're portraying their lovely life , and you captured their happiness in plenty of wonderful moments : when William is drawing his beloved Elizabeth , when they fall asleep in the arms of each other , when he seems to always know what she's thinking, when they are making love , of course..
She's his anchor to this reali and and it's heart-wrenching to think how much he needs her ...as much as her nerves are screaming for him.. Absolutely beautiful . Reading about their life is entrancing , and I will never have enough !
All this part was perfectly built , a great mixture of tension , peace , joy , and fear. The last chapter was incredible , fabulous in its pace , until the final scene in which I was with William , overwhelmed with terror ; Drucilla's voice was really well done , and whereas William's world was shattering , with the awful words she was whispering endlessly , I was thinking : Buffy will come for him..
But now William will have to face the horror of what he heard...his poor heart feeling an excruciating pain , how will he accept all the changes ? Buffy will need to have strenght , more than ever . And Angel , the bastard , has to suffer a lot.
A fantastic , stunning , splendid work !

OH MY GOD!!! Don't leave me with that ending!!!!! I need to know more! These new chapters are great great great!

Im just about to read the last few chapters you updated (till 140)... even though I haven't read them yet i just wanted to tell you you're doin a fantastic job.
I don't want this story to ever end, even though I wanna know where this is headin!

Love your work... keep goin... thanx for the update!

Damn, what an update! *G* Loved the new chapters, especially the short one about sleep positions - that one just stuck out as an incredibly beautiful chapter to me. And I loved the buildup of tension in these chapters leading up to 140...William remembering words like her her and Slayer, and then Dru coming it - it's just SO great. I'm at the edge of my seat for the upcoming chapters and what William's reactions to all of this will be. This update was definitely worth the wait! I'm eagerly looking forward to more, can't wait!

OMG"!
I just LOOOOVE this story... though I have to say I can't WAIT till William finds out more about his Spike Years!
Hope it won't take too long till he sees more... I have to say the 'Watcher' bi the the last chapter nearly drove me insane! Great work!

I'm highly, highly impressed. A wonderful AU (I adore them, as does my muse) and I commend your muse for sticking with a single plotline for so long! ;3