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Never have I cried so much readig a fanfiction, I've been keeping up to date reading your latest chapters and I have offically fallen in love with this story. I can't wait to find out what Buffy says in answer to his question.

I haven't even read the update yet but I had to thank you for it! Yay! I've been waiting and it's finally here! Will review more after I read it..hehe :-)

WOW! I've read 149 chapters! I'm impressed, with my and and with you! 'cause you were the one that wrote it! And it's great!
I don't think it's too long ( it's too short, write more ;D)
It's like a novel, a brilliant novel... ;)
I hope you'll continue to update this( it would seem kind of silly to stop now, just so you know)so I can continue to be amazed by your work!

I have now read up to chapter 139, I think I will save chpt 140 for tommorrowI reI really liked the part where William discovered the secret stairs and the attic with all the paintings in it. I just like the whole story, it gets better and better!

SB

I have caught up to chapter 135 now and all I can say really is wow, they were wonderful chapters! The evil goings on at W&H and all the stuff with Dru, & Nathan Rayner, I can just tell there is some heartbreak to come soon :) Am I right? Guess I will just have to keep reading to find out!

SB

Brilliant work . Reading this was intense and aching ; your writing is tight , your dialogues so thoughtful and brisk , and some lines were so poignant , that I would have liked to find the right words to comfort them .
As much as I can imagine the dramatic waking-up that is Buffy's confession about his past - he being the sweetest of men , and discovering something so dreadful , so out of reacreach for his mind - I had some difficulties to understand why he was so angry with her ( even if I know that his confusion and his distress have to be directed toward someone ) , her who is obviously suffering deeply..
Of course she lied , she lived on lies for one year , but what d had have she done , whereas she was so happy to find him again , to welcome him as a man.. It was a very difficult task to tell the truth. And now it's a real nightmare.
I felt so sharply Buffy's pain and confusion , when William yelled at her if the life they shared was her idea of happiness , bc it wasn't his... I think my heart broke.
For it isn't her responsability if he was a monster for 120 years ! To realize the horror of what he has been , what he has lived for , must be incomprehensible , but he need to see that she's in the same torment.
The picture of them , crying , lonely , in their little house , was so , so sad..
For now I keep in mind that William has not Spike's memories : memories of blood , but also memories of passion , burning devotion , for the love os lis life , for the woman who's standing right in front of him.

Oh William , when will you accept her loving aura , again ?

Oh wow fabulous chapters. I'm sitting here bawling like a baby lol Please update soon

Threeelleellent chapters ; and the end of the last part broke my heart . The wait for the big conversation is killing me ..William's silence defines so deep hain ain and his torment , but his last line " It is all a bleedin' nightmare " gave me shivers. Their connection is so broken .. How could he accept his awful past , and how Buffy could explain their life before ?

Hanging on the edge of my seat - again - , and I implore you to give me more as soon as possible.

These chapters were so heart-wrenching..The anguish , the pain , felts by William were thoroughtly described ; and I felt sharply Buffy's dre

These chapters were heart-wrenching , and written with so much emotion ; the anguish and pain felt by William seemed to be unbearable , and I felt so sharply Buffy's dread , and her loneliness - wit with the warm presence of Dawn and John. They will needa lot of time to heal..Something has been broken between us ..the feeling of betrayal is strong in William , though he shouldn't be so hard with Buffy ; it was the most tearing and sad thing to imagine them , together in this bedroom where they had blissful moments , wounded , lost , side by side yet so lonely.. But I keep hope , with Dawn : they will get past this , together.
Thank you for this.