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schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really into your story and I hope that it won't be too long between chapters.Looking forward to seeing how they defeat the First again and how Buffy and William's relationship works out. Well written ! Hurry up with the next instalment please otherwise I'll have to actually talk to my husband ! ;p
person ace
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy to see this story continuing, no matter what the pace! Great new chapters--looking forward to what happens next.
person val
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Any size of this story is good. I have been following ever since the first ONL, and am always thrilled to see an update. I took a trip over to Julian when in San Diego, just to set the setting. Beautiful!
Am so glad they are back together. Love the trips William is taking Buffy on. I also love the more considerate and caring Buffy. You write a beautiful couple that is easy to follow and cheer for.
Happy Holidays to you too!
person Irene
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I have been with you from the very beginning and every time I see an update I am so happy. Keep writing, I have to know what will happen next.
person fayt
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit i am suprised this is not finished at 195 chapters. overall it is an enjoyable story. however, from about chapter 50-100 there was little plot. i did enjoy the spuffyness, but there wasnt even a building up of plot. things picked up though, and i managed to finish what you have written. will you be finishing the story?
person Lyren
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story very much. Please write more soon.
person Stacy
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And she's back!! As always, I was so excited to see an update. I kinda felt like this was a filler chapter but it was still great and of course I can't wait to see what happens next. Although, the part where William seemed to have a Spike memory seemed encouraging. Also, what's up with the scroll...can't wait to see what you do with story next. I'm still plugging along with you after all these...has it really been years??? Anyway, Thanks so so much for writing!!
person Rosebery
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story for a while but had to stop last summer when I lost my computer. I just got a new computer recently and caught up on the story, so I have to ask... is that the end? I feel kind of lost now...

By the way, this has been a wonderful story and is very well written. You kept me on the edge of my seat, made me laugh and cry. Thank you.
person All4Spike
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have spent the best part of the past 3 days reading this fic, and I am astounded and delighted by it. Although it gets a wee bit long-winded in places, it is worth it. What I want to know is why has it suddenly stopped? When is it going to be updated? I *really* want to know what this 2 year clause in the shoeshine prophecy is all about!!!!!
person Wolf
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
193 CHAPTERS!!!!!! YOU HAD A LOT OF TIME ON YOUR HANDS. PLEASE WRITE MORE.