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for Keeping Secrets

by libco

person Coolestchick8000@aol.com
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I rated four stars. It would have been three for the 'meh' vibe. Although I have a couple of gripes a) Anya would not have gone home from the hospital and left someone else to watch Xander , she would have stayed right there. and b) Buffy is acting like a total twelve year old, spying on everyone all the time. I doubt she would do that, to be honest. There's a kin 's 'so what' vibe about this story, but I like the premise, and I think it maybe just needs more passion. Or dirt, whatever :-)
person Mandylynn
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You simply must continue! I love the pairing and Buffy's reactions...it's great! Please! Continue...hurry!!!

~Mandylynn~
person dinodave
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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