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for Come, Come Again

by KahlanN

person Kirsten
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One review, you got it. I enjoyed this. There were some html artifacts which broke the flow some, but I can get over that. The pacing was nice, a little fast but that made sense in this chapter, since a lot of time you're describing events we already know. I like that you trusted your readers to get what you meant instead of banging us over the head with it. I hope you will keep writing this story.
person Moxy
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was great! More detailed than your other fic, so sweet, I want to see more!
person Taiorami
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, you have seven, but I figured another one will make you realize just how much we all want it. It's really good and I can't wait for more and I wanna know how Con, who I know is Angel's son right?, fits into it and...you shall give me more! *shakes fist* ...please.
person selen
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
only thing i can say -more more more- exciting story and i really wonder what is gonna happen now soooo please more more more
person rilee
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot. Could you write a sequal please?

ri
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i wish 2 know
person Kiristeen
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One review, huh? ::Grins!:: You got it. lol I'm definitely curious where this is headed. Enjoyed both this story and it's prequel.

Kiri

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