rate_review Reviews

SO FAR SO GOOD, BUT PLEASE START WITH THE ACTUAL ADULT PART SOON!I WANT MY SPIKE AND BUFFY ACTION.

Chapters 2 and 3 are wonderful. Great story, beautifully written.

Wow. You write action very well, and the story itself is engrossing. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I was having so much fun reading of Spike getting lucky. You capture his 120-year-old giddy enthusiasm gorgeously. And then I had to suddenly realise that there was a serious side to his new perk. Oh damn. But seiously I like how you get Spike to do good samaritan acts with minimum fuss and effort. You make it natural and seemlessly in character.

Fine first chapter. In your summery it was the snarky spike and spunky buffy that cought my attention (a nice break from insane spike and bitchy buffy). I'm really ebjoyinmg this spike just fine and am looking forward to meeting buffy.
Oh, and I really like Carol, hope to see her again.

Your beta, Isis, reccomended your story. I read her Yellow Skies, which is great. So is this story. LOL when Spike was driving off singing "Viva Las Vegas". I too picture him singing something from Billy Idol or The Sex Pistols.

I love your idea, very original and intriguing. Great writing, you really have Spike down well. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Not to mention how it ends up being Spuffy fun. :) Great writing, great pacing. I'm hooked and look forward to more.