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November 28, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Loved it
Well done
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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
re-read this AGAIN lol such a great story, sweet and funny and hot and i loved andrew's innocent little "so i switched them. was that bad?" lol great story :D
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww! this was a really good story. some problems with the formatting, some of the words kept getting eaten and combined. and i loved andrew's "did i do good?" after switching buffy adn spike. lovely, wonderful job :)
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LemonyChocolate I love you. I love your stories. I've been fallowing these few Xander/Angel stories more than... 5 years now. And they never get old. They only get better. Every times almost like the first. I find something i missed before or don't remember ready. And every time i wanna cry because of how beautiful they are. Thank you for writing them.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nice, hot and entertaining story.
You clearly have a talent for writing, and a good inspiration. However, there is one thing you should consider:
1.Personally, I think the erotica was too short. Almost rushed in. You should consider spending a little more time when you write erotic scenes.
Try to variate when you write erotica. You don?t have to have two persons go to bed and BAM, the ass pounding begins. There is som much more to use. Mouth, hands etc. (I am a little short of imagination, but you get the idea)
I you are having a hard time variating your work, try to look at other erotica scenes as inspiration. Also, there is a great guide at Adultfanfiction.net especially for writing same sex porn. At the front page, go to Resource section, then to writing tips. I am sure you will find it very helpful.
Reading your fiction was fun. I think you should continue to write fictions. The tip before was just my personal taste, and isn?t to be taken too seriously. But it would be nice if you gave it a thought.
Thank you for letting us read your story/ El gusto
You clearly have a talent for writing, and a good inspiration. However, there is one thing you should consider:
1.Personally, I think the erotica was too short. Almost rushed in. You should consider spending a little more time when you write erotic scenes.
Try to variate when you write erotica. You don?t have to have two persons go to bed and BAM, the ass pounding begins. There is som much more to use. Mouth, hands etc. (I am a little short of imagination, but you get the idea)
I you are having a hard time variating your work, try to look at other erotica scenes as inspiration. Also, there is a great guide at Adultfanfiction.net especially for writing same sex porn. At the front page, go to Resource section, then to writing tips. I am sure you will find it very helpful.
Reading your fiction was fun. I think you should continue to write fictions. The tip before was just my personal taste, and isn?t to be taken too seriously. But it would be nice if you gave it a thought.
Thank you for letting us read your story/ El gusto
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! This was such a good story. I'll admit i like angel/xander stories better then xander/spike or spike/angel. Just me i guess. But this was a really beautiful, hot, sexy, funny story. I kinda cried in the end. You did SUCH A GOOD JOB! Promise me that you'll e-mail me with more of your stories. Check you later!
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, really don't know how people can come up with such twisted complicated pairings!...
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hihi. Me again. Second review of your stories. This one was SOOO good. Kinda short... as in I can't get enough of the kawaiiness of it all. Can't wait to read more of your stuff... and will start on another immediately.
, lo, love, and dance,
Goruda Shiro
, lo, love, and dance,
Goruda Shiro
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good i enjoyed it so much I'm rereading it (something i almost never do with fan fiction)
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hell! It's hot!